I got a brand new copy in a box from Amazon today - Joshua Marker’s A Man’s Vision of the World! From the back:
“This book of poetry. . . is the combination of torn and put away pages from a time when all hope was lost. It’s my vision of the world, corrupted and beautiful. It’s about the time when I had come to understand that life just wasn’t so easy, looking at it face to face and from the sidelines as well. . . A riddled world of faults, lies, deception and lost horizons.”
If the title - which sounds like something you might find on a card table at the back of a Promise Keepers rally - doesn’t tip you off, perhaps the lack of serial commas will.
No. No, no. A thousand times no, and if you thought it for even a moment after reading that back cover, please just stop sending me Christmas cards. No, no, no.
From the section “Lost Search”
Chance
Taking a deep breath
I dive into a world,
A place called love.
Will I drown or swim with the greatest of ease?
That’s a chance I have to take.
or, Unconscious, from “Windless Mind”
Inner thoughts
Running endlessly into oblivion.
The dark rushing upon
The fields of white.
Taking control of desires, emotions.
I now realize the truth behind
The light at
The end of the tunnel.













May 9th, 2006 at 9:31
This gives me hope. I could write better than that drunk on choppy seas with nails stuck in my heels.
May 9th, 2006 at 12:58
Wow. I am cracking up. So this dude managed to get that drivel published? Sam, you are right; this is easier than it looks. I try to be gentle in my criticism, but this…is full of clichés and completely lacking in imagery. But hey, at least it’s funny!
December 29th, 2007 at 7:44
Well atleast this writer gave his words a chance to be heard. It sounds as if your minds cannot accept the reality of life. Open up and try to learn a few things otherwise sit back drink your fufu wine and bore yourselves. I say good day.
December 29th, 2007 at 12:29
Whoah. God likes bad poetry.
(God seems to write with a fair number of misspellings and bad cliches, too. I wonder if God is related to the author?)
January 24th, 2008 at 22:46
So, you’re his mother, right?